The Hiring Desk · CV Review

Your CV, read by
the person who screens them.

Send me your FIFO CV and the job you are chasing. Within three business days you get it back the way it lands on a hiring desk: the thirty-second verdict, exactly what gets it binned, what is missing for the role, and a rewritten screen block that puts the right things in the right order. From twenty years in HR across Australian mining and construction, and close to ten thousand CVs read.

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20 yrsIn HR across Australian mining and construction
FIFOA FIFO household of my own, onshore and offshore
3 daysBack to you, marked up, in business days
~10,000CVs read on the hiring side. Yours is read by me: no templates, no juniors

Resume writers charge A$249 to A$749 to make your CV look professional. Then it goes to a recruiter who spends thirty seconds on it, and nobody on your side ever finds out what happened in those thirty seconds. I do, because for the best part of twenty years those thirty seconds were my job.

I have been the person on the hiring side of Australian construction and resources companies through boom, bust and shutdown season. I have sat in the room where FIFO candidates get shortlisted and binned. I know which CVs get a call before the recruiter has finished their coffee and which ones never will, and it is almost never the reason the candidate thinks. At home, my husband and I have a FIFO household of our own, on two-and-one, four-and-one, six-and-one and eight-and-six, onshore and offshore. So I also know what the roster is going to do to you, and I will tell you if your CV is quietly promising something you cannot deliver.

This review is the honest half-hour nobody in this industry will give you for free. It is not a rewrite service. It is the screening itself, done to your CV before a recruiter does it, with the fixes written down.

How it works

Book and send

Pay A$179 through Payhip. Your receipt tells you where to send your CV (Word or PDF), the job ad or the type of role you are chasing, and a line on your tickets, licences and when you can start.

I screen it

I read it exactly as I would at work: thirty seconds first, then properly. I check it against the role, the site, the roster and the things recruiters look for that are never in the ad.

You get the report

Within three business days: your CV marked up, a one-page screen report, and a rewritten top-third screen block you can paste in. Plus a straight answer on whether to apply now or fix things first.

What you get

  • The thirty-second verdict. Would it survive the first screen, and if not, the exact line it died on.
  • The bin list. Everything on the CV that is costing you callbacks, in the order a recruiter sees it. Usually five to eight things, most of them small.
  • The gap list. What the role needs that your CV does not show, and whether that is a wording problem or a ticket problem.
  • The screen block, rewritten. Your licences, tickets, roster availability, point of hire and site history, written and ordered the way the screen wants them. Paste it in.
  • Which doors to knock on. For your profile, whether to go via labour hire, contractors, the operators, a traineeship or a regional move. The doors are different for everyone.
  • The honest call. Apply this week, or fix two things and apply in a fortnight. I will tell you which, and why.

What it is not

  • Not a full rewrite. I mark up your document and rewrite the block that matters. You keep ownership of the rest, and you will understand why every change was made.
  • Not a job. Nobody can promise you one, and anyone who does is selling something. I can make sure the CV is not the reason you are not getting calls.
  • Not a referral. I still work in HR in the industry, which is why I write under a pen name. I do not recruit for anyone through this and I cannot put you forward for a role. This is about your CV, not my contacts.
  • Not a phone call. It is written, so you can read it twice and act on it. If something in the report is unclear, reply and I will answer it.
  • Not visa advice. If you need a visa to work in Australia, only an OMARA-registered agent can advise you on that. Check any agent at mara.gov.au.

What the review actually looks like

Three applicants I see every week. The people are made up; the CVs, the ads and the reasons are not. Each one shows the three parts of the report that matter most: what the ad asked for, what the CV said, and what changed.

Example 1 · The CV that hides good experience

Jake, 34. Eight years civil construction. Applying for Trade Assistant, iron ore, Pilbara.

The ad asked forWhite Card, Working at Heights, Confined Space, EWP, current driver’s licence, FIFO ex Perth, 2/1 roster, site experience preferred.
What the CV saidPage one opened with a personal statement. The tickets were on page two, no expiry dates. Eight years of roads and drainage work were described as “general labouring duties”. Point of hire and availability were not mentioned anywhere.
Hardworking and reliable team player with strong communication skills seeking a new challenge in the mining industry. Able to work well under pressure and as part of a team... EMPLOYMENT 2017 - present Labourer, [civil contractor] General labouring duties as required.
What I'd changeJake has every ticket the ad asks for and eight years on live sites with plant, traffic and heights. The recruiter would never find out, because the CV reads like a retail application. The screen block goes to the top, the tickets get expiry dates, and “general labouring” becomes what he actually did.
JAKE [SURNAME] · Trade Assistant / Civil Labourer · Baldivis WA Point of hire: Perth · Available: any roster from 1 Nov · Australian citizen Tickets: White Card · Working at Heights (exp 03/27) · Confined Space (exp 03/27) · EWP yellow card · C class licence · First Aid (exp 08/27) Site experience: 8 yrs civil construction, roads and drainage, metro and regional WA. Excavator and roller spotting, traffic management, trenching and confined space entry on live sites. Two 12-hour-shift night projects.
Verdict: passes with changes. Apply this week, to contractors and labour hire first. Nothing to buy. The whole problem was the top third of page one.
Example 2 · The CV that does not meet the ad

Priya, 29. Retail store manager. Applying for Process Technician roles.

The ad asked forCertificate in Process Plant Operations or equivalent, two years’ experience in a processing environment, HR licence, fixed plant exposure.
What the CV saidA good, well laid out CV. Six years managing a store of twelve staff, rostering, stock, KPIs, two promotions. No tickets, no plant experience, no licence beyond C class. She had sent it to eleven process operator ads and heard nothing.
What I'd changeNothing about the CV would fix this, and I would say so rather than take the fee for a polish. The ad wants two years in a plant and she has none. That is a wrong-door problem. The report would show her the doors that do open for her profile: camp services and village roles, where running twelve staff and a roster is directly relevant and the operators are chronically short; utility and trade assistant via labour hire; and the traineeship route into processing if she wants the plant eventually. Then which two tickets to buy first for those doors, and which five to not buy.
Verdict: wrong door, not wrong person. Stop applying to process roles. Fix the target, then the CV needs a different screen block built for camp services and utility. That rewrite is in the report.
Example 3 · Credible, badly presented

Dean, 46. Boilermaker, 15 years. Applying for shutdown boilermaker roles.

The ad asked forTrade qualified boilermaker, shutdown experience, Working at Heights and Confined Space, pressure welding tickets an advantage, available at short notice, FIFO ex Perth.
What the CV saidSix pages. Chronological from his apprenticeship in 2009. The two shutdowns he had worked were mentioned on page four as a sentence inside a workshop job. Tickets listed without expiry dates. No start date, no availability, a photo, and the words “short notice” nowhere.
What I'd changeDean is exactly who the ad is for and his CV spends twenty of its thirty seconds on his apprenticeship. Two pages. Shutdown work first, named by plant type and duration, not buried in the workshop years. Tickets with expiries. “Available at 48 hours’ notice” in the screen block, because that is the sentence the shutdown recruiter is scanning for. Photo gone.
DEAN [SURNAME] · Boilermaker (trade qualified 2013) · Rockingham WA Point of hire: Perth · Available at 48 hours' notice, any roster · Australian citizen Tickets: Working at Heights (exp 11/26) · Confined Space (exp 11/26) · White Card · Gas test atmospheres · Dogging · EWP · HR licence Shutdown experience: Alumina refinery, 3 weeks, 2025 (digester repairs, pressure piping). Iron ore fixed plant, 2 weeks, 2024 (chute and liner replacement). Workshop: 12 yrs structural and pressure fabrication, [company type], Kwinana.
Verdict: passes the screen. Apply this week, direct to shutdown contractors and the maintenance labour hire firms, and get on their shutdown registers. Nothing to buy. Book the pressure welding ticket when the first swing pays for it.

These are illustrative examples with fictional applicants, not customer outcomes. Your report follows the same structure: the target, the thirty-second verdict, what the CV shows, what a reader cannot establish, the bin list, the rewritten screen block, which doors to knock on, and your next seven days.

"The CV that gets a call is rarely the best-looking one. It is the one where the recruiter can find the four things they are screening for without scrolling."

I have watched candidates with every ticket under the sun get binned because their White Card was on page three and their last job title said "general hand". I have watched a labourer with one ticket get a call because the top third of his CV read like the job ad. The difference is not talent and it is not luck. It is knowing what the screen is looking for, and that is a thing you can only learn from someone who has run it.

Why this and not a resume writer

FIFO resume writersThe Hiring-Side Review
Who reads your CVA writer, often with no hiring experience in the industryA senior HR professional with 20 years in HR across Australian mining and construction
What you getA new document, formatted for ATSYour CV screened like a real application, the bin list, the gap list, the rewritten screen block, and a straight call on whether to apply
What you learnNot much. The next role, you are back where you startedWhy every change was made, so you can do it yourself next time
The lived sideVariesA FIFO household of her own, so the roster, the camp and the first swing are not theory
PriceA$249 to A$749A$179

Competitor prices as listed publicly in October 2026. If you have already paid a writer, bring that CV. The review works on any document.

Three ways to do it

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The Top Third Check

Just the part that decides whether you get the call.

  • The thirty-second verdict: call, maybe pile or no call
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  • Your opening line, rewritten
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The Hiring-Side CV Review

The whole CV, read the way it lands on a hiring desk.

  • Everything in the Top Third Check
  • The whole CV marked up
  • The bin list and the gap list
  • A rewritten screen block and a straight call on whether to apply
  • Back within three business days
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A$279
The CV Rewrite

I rebuild it for you, ready to send.

  • Your CV rebuilt from the top, in the order a screener reads
  • The Ready for site block, profile, work history and tickets
  • Editable Word file and a PDF
  • One round of changes
  • Back within five business days
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Questions

Who are you, and why no name?
The Hiring Desk is written by the HR manager who reads your application: a senior HR professional, twenty years in HR across Australian mining and construction, most of it on the hiring side, still working in it. That is exactly why there is a pen name: nothing here is about any one employer, and I do not recruit for anyone through this site. What you get is how the whole industry screens and hires, from someone still inside it, plus a FIFO household of my own.
I have no experience and no tickets. Is this for me?
Yes, if you want to know whether to spend money on tickets before you do. Part of the report is which door to use for your profile and what to buy first. If your CV is not ready to be reviewed yet, I will say so and credit the review for when it is. Nobody pays A$179 to be told "get a White Card".
I am already in FIFO and want a better role.
Then the review is about the step up: how your site history reads, what a supervisor or operator role screens for that a trade assistant role does not, and what to stop saying. Send the ad for the role you want, not the one you have.
I am overseas.
The CV review works the same. If you do not yet have the right to work in Australia, I will tell you plainly that the CV is not your first problem, and I cannot advise on visas. Only OMARA-registered agents or Australian legal practitioners can. Verify any agent at mara.gov.au before you pay them.
How do I send my CV?
After payment, Payhip delivers a one-page note with the email address and a short list of what to include: the CV, the job ad or role type, your tickets and licences, your point of hire, and when you could start. Reply with those and the clock starts.
What if I am not happy with it?
Tell me. If the report does not do what this page says it does, I will fix it or refund it, in line with Australian Consumer Law and the Terms & Conditions.